Go raibh mile maith agat Merry, your corrected version seems to read and sound much better,in a nutshel you've clarified what I wanted to get across. Thanks for taking the time to help, I appreciate it so much. BridMhor, I do have a very genuine gra for the gaeilge and want to make sure my children do their little part to help keep the language alive !!
Again, thanks so much to all who read and took the time to post,your such a resource for everyone who wants clarification on irish, you dont make anyone feel like an amadan for getting it wrong !!
Keep up the obair iontach, I'll check in again later when I've noimead amhain, till then,
Bail o Dia ort,
Foighne ( Aishling ). X