Irish Translation Forum

I'd leave out "amach" - it means "out" and conflicts badly with the "isteach" in the next line.
There are several other errors/infelicities in it, too.

Really, I'd recommend that you go with PFolan's version. Change "lig" to "scaoil" if you want to, but otherwise don't change a thing. It's a very good translation.

Aibigéal

Aibigéal wrote:I'd leave out "amach" - it means "out" and conflicts badly with the "isteach" in the next line.
There are several other errors/infelicities in it, too.

Really, I'd recommend that you go with PFolan's version. Change "lig" to "scaoil" if you want to, but otherwise don't change a thing. It's a very good translation.

Aibigéal

Great minds think alike I said the same thing in my post except for the praise, which would have been bigheaded (which I am not).

thank you for your time and effort....



any other opinions from others....just so i can have it confirmed...cuase its for a tattoo...

thank you again appreciate it

thank you Aibigéal