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Can someone please help me with translating this? "I want to hold your hand forever, call you mine, and never let you forget it"

Ba mhian liom ná greim a bhreith ar do láimh go brách, Mo Ghrása a thabhairt ort, gan chead ar bith ort dearmad a dhéanamh air.

Gealún wrote:Ba mhian liom ná greim a bhreith ar do láimh go brách, Mo Ghrása a thabhairt ort, gan chead ar bith ort dearmad a dhéanamh air.

I don't think 'ná' is correct there.

Antóin wrote:

Gealún wrote:Ba mhian liom {ná} greim a bhreith ar do láimh go brách, Mo Ghrása a thabhairt ort, gan chead ar bith ort dearmad a dhéanamh air.

I don't think 'ná' is correct there.

I think it could probably do without it as well, but whether it's incorrect....

Have a look at this

Thank you so much.