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What Gumbi gave you looks really good. There are some expressions of "it is") which he has left out, but he knows more about natural-sounding Irish than I do, so his way may be better. I'll just show them below in case he or others have thoughts on it.
I like his Táim geallta as the ending, too. Literally, it means "I'm promised/sworn/pledged" (it can have several meanings like that).
With the fill words I mentioned:
Más gá aon ní a bheith caillte, 's é m'onór féin a chaillfear in ionad do cheannsa. [I also took out an extra "a" after féin, which was just a typo I assume] Más gá scaradh leis an saol seo, 's é m'anam féin a scarfar in ionad do cheannsa. Má thagann an bás gan choinne orainn, 's é mo bheatha féin a chaillfear in ionad do cheannsa. Táim geallta
I'm still a learner, so be sure to get input from others, especially for tattoos.
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